October 18, 2009

Ice Cold

Never been to the
northernmost
end of the earth
where iceberg
drifted...

But it felt like just
an inch away from
your shoulders...

The distance made
me shiver
I battled my own
December fever...

What more can be
colder than this
iceberg you
inflicted in me?

What more can be
painful than
knowing it never
melts away?

3 comments:

  1. "What more can be
    painful than
    knowing it never
    melts away?"

    how tragic, this pang of coldness

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  2. Interesting look at the coldness within a relationship. I like this. Very unusual

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  3. biting pang of truth. thanks for this

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